I loved you for just one more night
You came in that dream after our journey
–the long one walking apart
Off-guard
Edginess in our exchange
Expectation maybe fog
Night-wine seven candles two glasses
Utopian hours dismissed distance
unrestrained ecstasy
Though it ends again
_____Adriana Citlali
XX-VII-MMXVI
Source: A quadrille (44 words) to celebrate dVerse’s 5th anniversary!
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July 20, 2016 at 12:51 am
How sad that it ends again. Maybe more wine and conversations? Thanks for joining us for our 5th anniversary celebration.
July 20, 2016 at 1:03 am
Happy to join the celebration. 🙂
More wine and conversation are not an option, I guess. The nature of dreams is that they end, even if they feel real.
July 20, 2016 at 12:59 am
I’ve had dreams like this one. So real that makes you feel a long forgotten love as if new again.
July 20, 2016 at 1:04 am
That sense of reality… The strange remembrance after waking up, is part of the appealing of vivid dreams.
July 20, 2016 at 3:08 am
I think I may have lived this dream at least once. Strange how love can endure even past reality…maybe it is just the wine?
July 20, 2016 at 9:06 am
So sad when dreams are what seems the most blissful thing… it’s better when we find it in reality
July 20, 2016 at 1:51 pm
Bitter-sweet.
July 20, 2016 at 2:57 pm
Dreaming of an old love and once again…it ends. Gives one such an odd feeling when one awakens and moves about the new day. I wish for you a love that isn’t a dream or that ends.
July 21, 2016 at 3:13 am
Such poignant remembrances…short-lived love.
July 21, 2016 at 3:40 pm
unrestrained ecstasy – love it! All good things must come to an end, unfortunately – beautiful poem!
July 23, 2016 at 4:42 am
The dream that ends again leaving us brokenhearted yet again…torture. Well said.