Push those clouds a w a y . . .
Kick them! Far! far a w a y
Take me f u r t h e r
S c e n t m y s k y w i t h
golden sunflowers
glowing honey velvety warmth
cinnamon ray-paths freshly-cut dawn
smooth dewdrops cacao hints
a first love kiss & ephemeral youth
E n h a n c e m y s e n s e s
L o s e c o n t r o l
F r e e m e
Again!
_____Adriana Citlali
VI-I-MMXVI
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When space is silence... 
January 6, 2016 at 8:28 pm
Adriana! A tremendos poem! “Enhence my senses” Love it!
January 6, 2016 at 8:32 pm
My dear Mrs My Heaven,
Thanks for stopping by! Hugs and smiles!
January 6, 2016 at 8:42 pm
Love it! 🙂
January 6, 2016 at 10:47 pm
A sensual wonder this piece is, full of imaginative combinations ( i.e./freshly cut dawn/), fun to read, & i enjoyed chasing the words around the page as they formed interesting shapes. You rocked the prompt & salved my need for finding creativity out here on the dVerse trail.
January 7, 2016 at 9:35 am
Thanks, Glenn. It was a good prompt. Plus the long (almost snowless & dark) winter in Oslo really motivated me to remember sunny-scented times.
January 6, 2016 at 10:58 pm
Well..
Adriana
i don’t often
provide compliments
directly.. but this one
is by far the best i come
across today.. keeping in
mind i come across them
all year long every one..
you knocked it out of
pArk
simply
’cause
you
capture
essence
of human Freedom
here.. the smell
that lives
within..
my
friend..:)
January 7, 2016 at 9:36 am
Thanks a lot! I an glad to read that these scattered words work for you. I felt free after writing this piece. And feel happy after reading your comment.
January 7, 2016 at 9:41 am
Smiles.. With happy New Year to you.. Friend..:)
January 7, 2016 at 12:57 am
¡¡Hermoso!! =)
January 7, 2016 at 1:19 am
Scent my sky with golden sunflowers… Your poem does just that. Simply beautiful!
January 7, 2016 at 2:27 am
I love all those scents… I can imagine them now specially when its cold and icy outside ~ Thanks for joining us and wishing you Happy New Year !
January 7, 2016 at 9:37 am
Happy new year, Grace! Wishing you the best from cold and icy Oslo.
January 7, 2016 at 2:34 am
Your words are lovely and we are all different but for me the ‘art display’ of the words distracts and diminishes.
January 7, 2016 at 9:39 am
Thanks for the feedback. I agree, we are all different. I do not expect this form to appeal to everyone. I’m glad, though, that you enjoyed the words.
January 7, 2016 at 4:19 am
What a lovely, scent-infused poem. You brought it all to life in your dramatic and fun write.
Gayle ~
January 7, 2016 at 8:39 am
This is just wonderful… all those scents, so soft and vivid… I can almost imagine the scents have color. I would love to hear this read.
January 12, 2016 at 11:47 am
I am considering reading and recording some poems. I might dare doing it! Thanks for the encouragement.
January 12, 2016 at 11:54 am
It’s fun… when I started I used my mobile-phone, but I have now bought a podcast mic… a big difference really.
January 12, 2016 at 3:18 pm
Podcast mic? I’ll have to check that! 🙂
January 12, 2016 at 3:28 pm
I bought one that you connect with USB… feels like being in a studio…
January 7, 2016 at 4:45 pm
I agree 😀 this is absolutely amazing 😀
January 7, 2016 at 10:19 pm
Love the creative formatting on this. It really did take me up, up, and away! Peace, Linda
January 7, 2016 at 10:28 pm
So glad that it worked for you, Linda! Thanks.
January 8, 2016 at 4:09 am
Such a free mind full of joy…..very creative!
January 8, 2016 at 8:26 pm
Your poem is so full of light and lift along with scent for me! So pretty!
January 11, 2016 at 8:53 pm
As I scroll down I see many have comment on the use of scent in this and that’s exactly what smacked me…beautifully done.