When space is silence…

Words, sounds, and space…

Where’s the respect?

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L:   Ohh! How I hate slush!
      and those icy roads
      threatening our contact

R:   Her voice! Her voice complaining
      that our touch is too smooth
      Too slick for the season

L:   Unbelievable!
      Where is the respect?
      When was style forgotten?

R:   The bitch fell down
       So what?
       Everyone falls someday

L:    Winter is coming
      dark days ahead
      back into that closet

R:   Soon forgotten!
       while that bulky pair
       makes the rounds

L:   Oh! So unfair!
      How I hate that stuffy couple
      heavy and slow

R:   They’ve got no manners
      no etiquette
      no heels, no style

L:    Can’t breath here
       it’s too crowded
      I miss the rain …


_____Adriana Citlali
I-XII-MMXIII


 

Where's the respect?

Where’s the respect?


This poem is written for dVerse Poetics: A mile in these Shoes.

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Author: Adriana Citlali Ramírez

A citizen of the world, born in Mexico city... A physicist (working as a geophysicist) and a part-time artist (creative writing, oil/acrylic painting, photography)… All posts and poems ©Adriana Citlali Ramírez. All rights reserved.

7 thoughts on “Where’s the respect?

  1. where’s the respect…? yes… good question…i like your convo here and how you make your point with it adriana

  2. hahaha this is awesome…a conversation between the left and right shoe….smiles…the complaining of the other couple of shoes…ha…this was a trip…smiles.

  3. Ha.. winter can be hard on shoes.. and how nice conversation.. Maybe it’s time for those big one with spikes…

  4. Ah the thoughts and prejudices of shoes! Well done! Very nicely and lightly crafted. Thanks for joining in for Poetics!

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