When space is silence…

Words, sounds, and space…

Gothic times

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Manipulative sadness  
      vivacious master of the grievance we wont damage
fake
      casual echo
of a sassy duple in a resonant fugue

A night-spread lavishly disturbing us

Short  sparks  of vibrant violet light
single vision fighting a vacuous exchange
of psychedelic music

A sky slathered with sumptuous darkness

 Oscillatory feelings
  jazzy  beats
stark dialogue

Gothic times approaching

nonstop

No!

_____Adriana Citlali
XV-IX-MMXIII


Wordle 126

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Author: Adriana Citlali Ramírez

A citizen of the world, born in Mexico city... A physicist (working as a geophysicist) and a part-time artist (creative writing, oil/acrylic painting, photography)… All posts and poems ©Adriana Citlali Ramírez. All rights reserved.

9 thoughts on “Gothic times

  1. Manipulative sadness is a great start to this piece. Interesting combination of words. I also appreciate “lavishly disturbing…” Thanks for writing at The Sunday Whirl.

  2. Thank you for the feedback, Brenda. Ah! And it is my pleasure to participate at The Sunday Whirl.

  3. My favorite line is A sky slathered with sumptuous darkness. Yes!

  4. Very nice, and I agree with Sabra–that’s my favorite line also!

  5. along with the sky line I like the first two lines also.

  6. sky slathered with scrumpious darkness…haha…love that and the whole V thing in the middle…made me thing of the monologue from V for Vendetta…

  7. What some beautiful word combinations you have created here for us to savor and visualize.

  8. This is a poem that “does” things to you rather than you absorbing it passively. Good poetry causes a reaction in the reader. This is excellent poetry. many thanks.

    Greetings from London.

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