When space is silence…

Words, sounds, and space…

A black bird

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               Touch

Memory
    Completeness

                               Heat

A black bird covers the day
with butterfly wings
  in a hug surrounding the sky

               Touch

It’s space between two bodies
when the distance disappears

                               Heat

Finding colors in the absence
Feeling contact in a sign

    Completeness

The wings open the exit of dreams
Nobody wants to return

_____Adriana Citlali
I-X-MMIII
XXV-XI-MMXII
XIII-II-MMXIII

  
  
  
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Author: Adriana Citlali Ramírez

A citizen of the world, born in Mexico city... A physicist (working as a geophysicist) and a part-time artist (creative writing, oil/acrylic painting, photography)… All posts and poems ©Adriana Citlali Ramírez. All rights reserved.

5 thoughts on “A black bird

  1. I like this, especially these lines:

    Touch

    It’s space between two bodies
    when the distance disappears

  2. Lovely words–very sensitive.

  3. nice…i like the same lines as tony, but also…finding color in absence….is a really cool line….

  4. I liked all of this. It’s very creative and sensuous in a way. A good read.

  5. i like it’s space between two bodies when the distance disappears

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